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Deed is Done, Lonely Bastard

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I was afraid...
...you'd walk here...

drunk,
dead,
lonely,
upset.
But when you didn't;
I felt no remorse on what I did.
It didn't impact you well enough.
Go back to square one.
Then we'll talk.
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FallenfromtheStarz's avatar
How are you using afraid in this poem? To signify like you wanted him to be there,or to signify you did not want him to be there?And Afraid and lonely seems to be the key words in this poem.It seems like there is hints of both people being "afraid", "lonely" in this poem.